leahbobet ([personal profile] leahbobet) wrote2009-09-19 07:38 pm

The things you find when revising a manuscript for the eleventy-billionth time:

"The frown surfaces on my mouth before I can turn away."

Well, yes, Matthew. Where else would it surface, your ass?

*rewrites*

(Understand, this little beauty survived through five drafts.)

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